Thursday, April 14, 2011

Poem 5: A Work of Artifice by Marge Piercy

A WORK OF ARTIFICE

The bonsai tree
in the attractive pot
could have grown eighty feet tall
on the side of a mountain
till split by lightning.
But a gardener
carefully pruned it.
It is nine inches high.
Every day as he
whittles back the branches
the gardener croons,
It is your nature
to be small and cozy,
domestic and weak;
how lucky, little tree,
to have a pot to grow in.
With living creatures
one must begin very early
to dwarf their growth:
the bound feet,
the crippled brain,
the hair in curlers,
the hands you
love to touch. 

Analysis

       In this poem, I took it to be that the 'bonsai tree' was actually a woman. They live in the 'attractive pot', which would be a nice home. Marge Piercy writes, that the bonsai tree "could have grown eighty feet tall" which was its potential. If it had not been suppressed so much by the gardener, then it would be more than nine inches on height. The gardener is a man who has suppressed a woman, and because of that, she can no longer grow, for her personality has been severely diminished.
       The 'gardener' (man) tells her that she must be "small and cozy, domestic and weak" and continues to tell her "how lucky [she is] to have a pot (house) to grow in". By saying this, the woman/bonsai tree is being severely suppressed by the man/gardener because he is telling her that she has to act a certain way. She must take care of domestic activities and tasks, which depresses her. She writes that "one must begin very early to dwarf [a woman's] growth" in the way that she has been dwarfed.  

No comments:

Post a Comment